The language used in this…

The language used in this statement is not very reader-friendly. If you're looking to obtain more feedback, I would suggest writing this information at a grade 8 level, as educational and public materials are intended to be written to ensure understanding from the broader public. We need a permanent moratorium on water bottling permits. Have you seen the ocean lately? Many of the corporations that bottle water, significantly contribute to plastics taking over our land and water. This is unacceptable. If we would like the human race to continue, we need to put a stop to this.