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Subject: Identifying the Most Energy Efficient Products Available
The following sentence in the section on “Conservation and Energy Efficiency” warrants a re-wording or expansion: “New and enhanced efficiency standards help reduce consumers’ energy bills, increase the choice of energy efficient products available for sale, and play a significant role in reducing energy consumptions and GHG emissions.”
It is not clear how enhanced efficiency standards would increase the choice of energy efficient products available for sale.
Suggested re-wording: delete “increase the choice of” to “identify the most”.
Edited sentence: “New and enhanced efficiency standards help reduce consumers’ energy bills, identify the most energy efficient products available for sale, and play a significant role in reducing energy consumptions and GHG emissions.”
[Original Comment ID: 204865]
Soumis le 11 juin 2018 11:38 AM
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Planning Ontario's Energy Future: A Discussion Guide to Start the Conversation.
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