Detailed comments on the…

Detailed comments on the Places of Worship Guide are attached.
In addition, please see my general comments on the Heritage Toolkit in comment 58105.

This Guide has excellent, well written case studies, nestled amid often confusing, poorly written and disorganized text.
The intention of providing a guide targeted to a special type of heritage property, one increasingly threatened by changing sociological trends, is laudable.
The Guide could, however, be much more useful if it were better written and organized, and also if it contained (or at least referred to) the varied types of advice offered by the Places of Faith collaboration -- e.g. fundraising, communication, problem-solving strategies.

A detailed page-by-page critique is attached.